The Clock That Counted Wishes
Zeke discovers a magical clock that counts wishes—selfish ones go backward, generous ones forward. By helping wishes find their kind hearts, he becomes the clock's new keeper.
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In a crooked little shop at the end of Dandelion Lane, where the streetlights blinked like sleepy fireflies, there lived a boy named Zeke who loved three things: questions, adventures, and his grandfather’s curious clock shop.
The shop was filled with clocks of every kind—tall clocks that bonged, small clocks that pinged, and silly clocks that went “boing-boing-splat!” instead of tick-tock. But Zeke’s favorite was the one his grandfather kept on the highest shelf, wrapped in a velvet cloth the color of midnight.
“That clock is special,” Grandfather would say, his eyes twinkling like stars behind his round spectacles. “It doesn’t count hours or minutes. It counts something far more important.”
“What does it count?” Zeke would ask, bouncing on his toes.
“Wishes,” Grandfather whispered. “But only the wishes that really matter.”
One Tuesday evening, when the moon hung in the sky like a silver coin, Grandfather lifted the velvet cloth. The clock underneath was magnificent! Its face was made of mother-of-pearl that shimmered with rainbow colors, and instead of numbers, it had tiny painted doors—twelve in all. The hands were shaped like shooting stars.
“Tonight,” said Grandfather, “this clock is yours to watch.”
Zeke’s eyes grew as round as dinner plates. “Really? Truly?”
“Really, truly. But remember—it only counts wishes that come from the heart. Selfish wishes make it go backwards, but generous wishes make it go forward. When it reaches the twelfth door at midnight, something magical happens.”
Grandfather kissed Zeke’s forehead and shuffled off to bed, leaving Zeke alone with the extraordinary clock.
At first, nothing happened. Zeke sat cross-legged on the counter, chin in hands, watching and waiting. The star-shaped hands pointed to the first little door. Then, suddenly—TING!—the door popped open, and out tumbled a wish, glowing like a firefly.
It was Mrs. Pettigrew from next door! Well, not really Mrs. Pettigrew, but a tiny, glowing version of her. The wish-Mrs. Pettigrew was wishing for a new hat because her old one was getting shabby, but mostly because she wanted everyone to admire her.
The clock’s hands shuddered and moved… backwards.
“Oh no!” said Zeke. He understood now. That was a selfish wish.
But then—TING!—the second door opened. Out floated a wish from Tommy, the boy who delivered newspapers. Wish-Tommy was wishing he could buy his little sister the crayons she wanted, even though he’d been saving for a new bicycle.
The clock’s hands leaped forward with a happy chime!
TING! The third door: Someone wished for rain to end so they could play outside. Backwards went the hands.
TING! The fourth door: Someone wished their grandmother would feel better soon. Forward!
TING! The fifth door: Someone wished they had more candy than anyone else. Backwards!
Zeke watched, fascinated, as wish after wish appeared. He started cheering for the generous wishes and groaning at the selfish ones. The clock seemed to enjoy his company, glowing brighter with each kind wish.
By the eighth door, Zeke noticed something peculiar. Some wishes were stuck—floating in mid-air, half-in and half-out of their doors, flickering uncertainly. These wishes couldn’t decide if they were selfish or generous.
One was from a girl who wished to win the spelling bee—partly because she’d studied hard, but also partly because she wanted to show off.
“That’s a tricky one,” Zeke said to the clock.
The clock’s hands trembled, unable to move forward or back.
Zeke thought hard, then had an idea. “What if,” he whispered to the flickering wish, “she wanted to win because she worked hard AND because it would make her parents proud? That’s generous too, isn’t it? Being proud of yourself can help you be kind to others!”
The wish seemed to listen. It glowed brighter, turning from murky yellow to warm gold. The clock’s hands jumped forward!
The other stuck wishes heard this too. Zeke helped each one find its generous side:
A boy who wanted new shoes because his were worn out—and because he was tired of being teased. “Standing up for yourself helps you stand up for others!” Zeke said. Forward went the clock!
A woman who wanted a bigger garden—partly for beauty, partly for pride. “But gardens feed bees and butterflies and make the whole neighborhood happy!” Zeke reminded the wish. Forward!
Finally, at five minutes to midnight, the hands pointed to the eleventh door. Zeke held his breath.
TING!
Out floated one last wish, and Zeke gasped. It was his own wish! He watched his glowing self wish for… for…
The wish-Zeke was wishing to be the best at something—anything—so people would think he was special.
The clock’s hands began sliding backward. Zeke’s heart sank.
“Wait!” he called out. “That’s not really what I wish for! I mean… maybe sometimes… but what I really, REALLY wish is…” He closed his eyes and thought about what truly made his heart feel warm. “I wish I could help people the way Grandfather does. I wish I could make people smile. I wish… I wish everyone could see that wishes are more wonderful when we share them!”
The stuck wish suddenly blazed with golden light. The clock’s hands shot forward, ringing like bells! Both hands landed on the twelfth door exactly at midnight.
The entire clock began to glow, brighter and brighter, until Zeke had to shield his eyes. All twelve doors flew open at once, and out poured not wishes but something even better—dream dust! It sparkled in every color imaginable, swirling around the shop like a gentle tornado.
Where the dust landed, magical things happened: Old clocks began keeping perfect time. Broken springs mended themselves. And in the window, a sign appeared in glittery letters: “ZEKE’S WISH REPAIR—WE HELP FIND THE GENEROUS HEART IN EVERY WISH.”
When Grandfather came downstairs the next morning, he found Zeke asleep at the counter, the clock beside him (now pointing back to one), and that glowing sign in the window.
“Well, well,” Grandfather chuckled softly, draping a blanket over his grandson. “The clock has chosen its next keeper.”
And from that day on, Zeke helped his grandfather in the shop, but with a special new job. Whenever someone came in feeling grumpy or selfish, Zeke would tell them about the clock that counted wishes. By the time his story was done, their hearts felt lighter and their wishes felt kinder.
Because Zeke had learned the clock’s most important secret: Every wish has the chance to become generous. Sometimes wishes just need a little help finding their way.
And every night, when Zeke wound the special clock, its star-shaped hands seemed to wink at him, as if to say, “Good work today. Tomorrow, we’ll count even more wishes that matter.”
The End
Sweet dreams, little one. May all your wishes come from the heart. 💫
